September 8, 2006

Primer sueño

Por: Manuel Clavell Carrasquillo en fragilidad

atrio casa pompeyaescribe / manuel clavell carrasquillo
redacción de estruendomudo

Estábamos sentados en un banco de piedra colocado estratégicamente en uno de los lados del patio interior rectángulo con columnas griegas y sus respectivas plantas malas hierbas enredadas. La veía de perfil y, ahora que lo pienso, me resultaba extraño que me atrajesen sus gafas negras y su little black dress en hilo; de confección impecable. Entre vientos grises y espesos como nieblas quedábamos envueltos en sustancia viscosa subconsciente al tiempo que desarrollábamos una conversación ininteligible. Sólo la luz amarilla hueso de la luna más llena y más cercana de las que he sido testigo cortaba las semitinieblas. Tenía la piel blanquísima. Al despertarme, quise saber si ésa era la muerte, pero la duda quedó sembrada luego de haber sentido la certeza de que era una mujer atractiva y serena. La muerte debe ser histérica y bastante fea. Tengo una idea de quién es pero no puedo revelar su nombre. Quizás he fabricado el personaje que quiero que ella sea.

Alguien quería contratarme, no me dejaba, resistía, volvía la oferta y todo se transformaba en un beat líquido de ambient (el musicólogo me prohíbe que hable de electrónica). Su presencia en el lado opuesto de la cama se tornó un bulto de sábanas. Mis párpados se entrebrían, sí, pero de inmediato se precipitaban en caída vertiginosa.

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  1. j.a. bonilla said,
    on September 9th, 2006 at 7:34 am

    “Entre vientos grises y espesos como nieblas quedábamos envueltos en sustancia viscosa subconsciente al tiempo que desarrollábamos una conversación ininteligible.” Estas son las cuestiones que a mí me gusta leer. Sueles ponerte así los viernes y los sábados, así que yo espero con solapada ansia el final de la semana para disfrutarme las franjas de significados que has logrado extraerle a los restos y a la resaca.

  2. on September 9th, 2006 at 3:21 pm

    ¿Es casualidad que tenga el mismo título que la mejor y más significativa obra poética de Sor Juana Inés de la Cruz?

  3. on September 9th, 2006 at 6:29 pm

    hay muertes como esa, no quepa la menor duda. recuerda en el lado oscuro del corazón la magistral muerte que dramatizó nacha guevara. era casi un orgasmo escuchar a oliverio, el poeta, sexual y baboso, lamerle con lascivia en sus oídos las siguientes palabras: muerte puta, muerte cursi, muerte cachonda, y escapársele, para hacer quilombo en la parranda.

    buen texto, sobre todo el primer párrafo.
    s.

    sonia

  4. on September 9th, 2006 at 7:45 pm

    Hector: inmerecida comparación, aquí una muestra de lo que hizo la santa:

    El viento se apaga, el perro duerme, nada se mueve. La cuna del mar, donde reposan el sol y los peces, dos veces enmudecida, apenas se balancea. En las cuevas y barrancas escondidas de la montaña los animales, tanto los tenebrosos como los temerarios, sucumben a una misma ley de sueño. El rey alerta, Acteón, el cazador, convertido en ciervo fugaz, reposa en el bosque: los ojos abiertos, soñoliento; ya está durmiendo, pero aun en sueños endereza las inquietas orejas al menor ruido. En la maleza, el nido tembloroso, lleno de los hijos durmientes del aire inmóvil, está tranquilo. El águila de Júpiter, recelosa de la paz, se balancea cautelosamente en una pata, para no adormecerse, sosteniendo en la garra levantada una piedra reloj que le mide el tiempo de reposo. Una órbita eterna y un ramo dorado de penas son la corona del monarca.

    ja: son los tequilazos de fin de semana.

    sonia: tienes toda la razón, que transparente es la escritura, el segundo párrafo es absolutamente innecesario y se añadió a última hora. En cuanto a las muertes como esa, me vi en la encrucijada de hacer la aclaración, aunque mal hecha, porque pensé que de esa manera se percibía: no sentí que era la muerte en el sueño, pero muy bien puede serlo.

    besos negros hasta que amanezca, a todos.:roll:

  5. on September 9th, 2006 at 7:53 pm

    ah, se me olvidaba decir, Sonia, ese segundo párrafo está ahí porque sólo sueño en semanas como ésta; cuando mi marido está de viaje. 🙁

  6. Mara said,
    on September 9th, 2006 at 8:51 pm

    Ése segundo párrafo es una transcripción de un sueño de Severina Skanking.

    La que resucitó de entre los venados.

  7. on September 10th, 2006 at 12:43 am

    Compañera Mara: si me va a acusar de plagio al menos exijo que devele el original. Severina Skankin hace tanto tiempo que no escribe, está tan ocupada con su jardín, que deja mucho que desear así que más decoro por favor, más decoro. O un link al menos, un link.:wink:

  8. casuza said,
    on September 10th, 2006 at 3:42 pm

    no se te prohibe nada , estúpido

  9. on September 10th, 2006 at 5:01 pm

    (1) Pensé que el título era a propósito y no una casualidad de los “tequilazos”. Conste que no te estoy acusando de plagio. Digo, por si acaso. 😯

    (2) La ventaja de no ser un come libros nerdo como Sor Juana es que me disfruté al máximo el segundo párrafo, sin rebuscarle una fuente para hacer un comentario cool eslach inteligente. Buen texto; me gustó, y punto.

    (3) ¡Qué tierno! ¡Escribes así cuando no está tu esposo! ¡Qué hermoso! 🙂 Es la primera vez que aludes a esto en el blog. ¡Tus lectores te debemos un nenúfar! 😉

  10. on September 10th, 2006 at 5:07 pm

    Perdón, en (2) debí decir “poeta” en lugar de “come libros nerdo”, que es lo mismo. 😉

  11. on September 10th, 2006 at 5:32 pm

    Otra de la cultureta anti-intelectual. It never sleeps…

  12. Pidoki Saint-Point said,
    on September 11th, 2006 at 4:35 am

    quiero compartir contigo mi sopita de pollo y gengibre: relatos de day after (heading)

    Era parte de un plan macabro y sin embargo, Definition, interpretada por Pedro Kruder y Ricardo Dorfmeister, continuaba su cruel sensualidad expidiendo a través de las 901. No era verdad que era un sueño, baby, había una mujer con unos Manolo Blahnik, y estaba encuadrada en la toma. Cierto que las malas hierbas, las trinitarias, junto con los azulejos, los tres tipos de albahaca y las miosotis in full bloom, comenzaban a tornarse anaranjadas y rosa fucha (habría que añadirle la cuestión esta del neón y los juegos constantes con Cacheila?). El gris era mucho más espeso mientras los colores en las plantas recrudecían.

    Importa poco, corazón, Junya Watanabe nos mantendrá siempre bien arregladitos y olorosos.

    Att.
    Los Cuatro Negros bajo la tutela de Kawakubo

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